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Health education is an essential aspect of commmunity health.Do you agree or disagree.

#health #education #aspect #commmunity
It is argued that
health
education
 is
the
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 significant part of our life and it helps
to
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us to
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 keep fit
people
's
health
. I completely agree with the statement. There are a number of reasons why I believe
health
education
 is important for everyone. One possible reason is that if
people
 study
in
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health
 science, they will know about
dangerous
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the dangerous
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disease
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diseases
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 (diabetes, heart attacks, blood pressure and so on) which will help to reduce those diseases. As
people
 will avoid
to do
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 works which are occurring these diseases. Another reason is that the
health
education
 subject will mitigate obesity because
people
 will start
physical
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the physical
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 exercise. After
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studying
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studies
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 it, individuals will understand that physical exercise helps to keep
body
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the body
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 fit and fine
as well as
refreshes
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 our mind.
As a result
, the physical
work
 will burn their extra fat and will balance their weight.
For example
, in Bangladesh physical teaching and
education
 is
compulsory
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 subject which is why 80% of students'
health
 problems are solved and
also
 decrease sickness.
In addition
,
the
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health
education
 helps to boost
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the country
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country
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country's
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 development because
people
 will avoid unhealthy
life's
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lives
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 and will take healthy food
such
 as vegetables ,
fruits
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and fruits
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,
maintaining
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maintain
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diet
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a diet
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 chart and so on which is why they can easily focus
in
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on
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 their
work
 will
energetic
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an energetic
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 and calm mind .
For instance
, The Daily Star newspaper published America is
the
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a
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development
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developing
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 country because of its
employees
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employee's
employees'
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 hard
work
 and most employees like to do exercises for increasing the concentration of
thir
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their
work
.
However
, it will increase a person's longevity.
Moreover
, most
people
 will follow
health
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a health
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 routine and will not
to
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do which are not good for their
health
.
For example
, in
India
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,India
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 60% of
people
 tend to avoid to take smoke by reading
health conscious
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health-conscious
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 articles which
helps
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help
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 to drop untimely death. In conclusion, considering the factors discussed. I believe
health
education
 is necessary for
people
's lives and it is a blessing for their
health
progession
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progression
.
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