The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the diagram illustrates the
process
by which Use synonyms
chocolate
is made.
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overall
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process
of producing Use synonyms
chocolate
requires 10 stages in total. it starts with collecting ripe red pods from cacao trees grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia and culminates when the inner part of the Use synonyms
beans
is pressed in the liquid Use synonyms
chocolate
.
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to begin
with, cacao trees' ripe red pods which are grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia, are Linking Words
then
harvested to collect white cacao Linking Words
beans
inside. afterwards, Use synonyms
beans
are fermented by being located between 2 leaves before being spread in sun to dry. In the following step, the dried Use synonyms
beans
are packaged in large sacks in order to be transported by trains or lorries to the factory.
the Use synonyms
process
continues with Use synonyms
beans
being roasted in the fire. after that, Use synonyms
beans
are experienced a grinding procedure, in which Use synonyms
beans
are crushed and outer shells are removed via 2 pipes. the Use synonyms
process
ends with the inner part of the Use synonyms
beans
being compressed into the Use synonyms
chocolate
liquid.Use synonyms
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