The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the diagram illustrates the
process
by which
chocolate
is made.
overall
, the
process
of producing
chocolate
requires 10 stages in total. it starts with collecting ripe red pods from cacao trees grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia and culminates when the inner part of the
beans
is pressed in the liquid
chocolate
.
to begin
with, cacao trees' ripe red pods which are grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia, are
then
harvested to collect white cacao
beans
inside. afterwards,
beans
are fermented by being located between 2 leaves before being spread in sun to dry. In the following step, the dried
beans
are packaged in large sacks in order to be transported by trains or lorries to the factory. the
process
continues with
beans
being roasted in the fire. after that,
beans
are experienced a grinding procedure, in which
beans
are crushed and outer shells are removed via 2 pipes. the
process
ends with the inner part of the
beans
being compressed into the
chocolate
liquid.
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