The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the diagram illustrates the
process
by which chocolate
is made.
overall
, the process
of producing chocolate
requires 10 stages in total. it starts with collecting ripe red pods from cacao trees grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia and culminates when the inner part of the beans
is pressed in the liquid chocolate
.
to begin
with, cacao trees' ripe red pods which are grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia, are then
harvested to collect white cacao beans
inside. afterwards, beans
are fermented by being located between 2 leaves before being spread in sun to dry. In the following step, the dried beans
are packaged in large sacks in order to be transported by trains or lorries to the factory.
the process
continues with beans
being roasted in the fire. after that, beans
are experienced a grinding procedure, in which beans
are crushed and outer shells are removed via 2 pipes. the process
ends with the inner part of the beans
being compressed into the chocolate
liquid.Submitted by bobong120906 on
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