The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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the diagram illustrates the
process
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by which
chocolate
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is made.
overall
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, the
process
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of producing
chocolate
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requires 10 stages in total. it starts with collecting ripe red pods from cacao trees grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia and culminates when the inner part of the
beans
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is pressed in the liquid
chocolate
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.
to begin
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with, cacao trees' ripe red pods which are grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia, are
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harvested to collect white cacao
beans
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inside. afterwards,
beans
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are fermented by being located between 2 leaves before being spread in sun to dry. In the following step, the dried
beans
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are packaged in large sacks in order to be transported by trains or lorries to the factory. the
process
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continues with
beans
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being roasted in the fire. after that,
beans
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are experienced a grinding procedure, in which
beans
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are crushed and outer shells are removed via 2 pipes. the
process
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ends with the inner part of the
beans
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being compressed into the
chocolate
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liquid.
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