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The line graph below gives information about the percentage of women aged 15-64 in employment between 2003 and 2009.

The line graph below gives information about the percentage of women aged 15-64 in employment between 2003 and 2009.
#line #information #percentage #women #employment
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 information about the employment proportion of women aged 15-64 between 2003 and 2009.
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the Employement
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Employement
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Employment
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iceland
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Iceland
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were
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 fell down,
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, the percentage of women in the age group 15-64 in other countries increases.
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 for
iceland
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 was the highest proportion during the research. In 2003, 80% of females in
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Iceland
 had
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jobs,
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 to about 70% in Canada.The percentage of employed females in
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were
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 close to 60%
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 are higher than the
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 and
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 at
roung
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around
 35% and 20% respectively. After six years,
iceland
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 saw a slight fall in the employment rate of women in
this
 age group, to under 80%.
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Canada and
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Germany
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shows
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 insignificant rises in the figures by about 1% and 5% in turn.A similar rise was shown in
chile
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Chile
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 with about 40%. Despite of marginal fall in
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 two years turkey went back to
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 beginning position in 2009.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rises" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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