Some people think that teenagers who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adult criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many
people
argue that teenagers
' crime rates have been rising in modern society, due to
this
, they say young criminals
should receive the same punishments as adult criminals
. However
, I think we should discuss it from both angles.
In general, most teenagers
still are students
, and they are learning the rules in this
society. As a result
, I personally think that it is actually a chance to teach teenagers
or those young children if they commit some crime. The tendency to commit crimes
always be shaped when people
were at young
age, Add an article
a young
therefore
, we should teach them by
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apply
criminals
or other people
in the world. It can help them to change their behaviors
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behaviours
in
the rest of their life.
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On the other hand
, some people
think that just because those teenagers
still learning as students
, they should be given the opportunity. Although
they are committing the same crimes
as other people
such
as stealing, drugging, and murdering, it is because they do not have enough knowledge and a mature mentality. We should forgive them and give them second chance, with love and support, and wish those students
can be better.
By way of conclusion, I strongly believe that teenagers
commit
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who commit
crimes
whether it is minor or major should be treated by
the same punishments as adult Change preposition
with
criminals
. In this
way, I think it can boost the deterrent, let teenagers
realize that it can be a serious consequence
if they do something wrong, and avoid young Fix the agreement mistake
consequences
students
commit the same crimes
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