In many countries, people go shopping only for their needs. However, recently it has become a development into a form of entertainment. Why do you think it happens? Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, there are two groups of individuals who perceive the word "shopping" differently.
For the
first group of Change preposition
The
people
shopping Use synonyms
it
is when they need to buy something Correct pronoun usage
apply
what
they need. Change the word
that
However
, for the second group of Linking Words
people
shopping it is Use synonyms
an
entertainment. I have some variants Remove the article
apply
why
it is happening. So, in Change preposition
of why
this
Linking Words
essay
I will Add a comma
,essay
further
examine Linking Words
this
thought-provoking question.
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To begin
with, there are a lot of adults who do not like shopping and do it only when they need it. They believe that shopping is wasting of Linking Words
theire
time. Correct your spelling
their
Also
, maybe they do not have Linking Words
ability
to Correct article usage
the ability
shopping
at all , considering that they Wrong verb form
shop
so
busy. Add a missing verb
are so
Moreover
, generally Linking Words
speaking
suggested thatAdd the comma(s)
,speaking
,
adults can wear the same pair of shoes for a long time and Remove the comma
apply
decided
to buy new Wrong verb form
decide
only
after Correct pronoun usage
ones only
old
pair of shoes will destroy. Correct article usage
the old
As a result
, they do not gain Linking Words
an
enjoyment Correct article usage
apply
while
they do shopping.
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Initially
, shopping was not entertainment. Linking Words
In contrast
, after Linking Words
era
of prosperity began, Add an article
the era
an era
marketologist
started to think about how to increase sales. Resultantly, they decided to create different activities inside Correct your spelling
bracketologist
of
big and small shopping malls. From that moment had been created various things for customer satisfaction . Change preposition
apply
For instance
, restaurants, small amusement zones for children, dissimilar activities zone etc. Linking Words
Thus
, many individuals Linking Words
prefer
spend Add the particle
toprefer
theire
time somewhere in a shopping mall where a lot of things Correct your spelling
their
what
they can do. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, many Linking Words
people
admire window shopping. Use synonyms
In other
Linking Words
words
they do not buy Add a comma
,words
iteams
they just look at them and even enjoy Correct your spelling
items
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
As well as
Linking Words
,
many Remove the comma
apply
people
Use synonyms
mad
about fashion and they esteem look catchy and stylish. Add a missing verb
are mad
Therefore
, they Linking Words
savor
shopping and adore to select different Change the spelling
savour
iteams
for Correct your spelling
items
theire
outfits.
In conclusion, there are a lot of factors in shopping malls which can help to enhance Correct your spelling
their
people
's desire for shopping. Use synonyms
However
, there are Linking Words
also
individuals who do not appreciate shopping. So, everything depends on personality.Linking Words
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