The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given column chart illustrates the international turnover of the top five telephone brands for 4 years.
Overall
, there are 5 companies
such
as
Samsung
, Apple,
Nokia
, LG, and ZTE. Three periods are given(2009, 2011, 2013). The most traded mobile phone was
Nokia
in 2009 and 2011.
Samsung
was a bestseller in 2013. Turning to the details, in 2009,
Nokia
was the best with 450
points
.
However
, it decreased
year
after
year
. In 2011,
Nokia
sold for 400 scores with a difference of 50
points
. After that,
Nokia
had a sharp drop in 2013 by 150
points
. The smallest company was ZTE with a gradual increase for 4 years. As it is obvious,
Samsung
was the second bestseller company in 2009.
Then
, it started to increase. It rose by 100
points
in 2011, but it could not overtake
Nokia
in that
year
.
Finally
, the
Samsung
brand could ahead of
Nokia
in 2013 by 200
points
. Apple and
Samsung
were the only brands which increased
year
after
year
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words samsung, nokia, points, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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