The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given column chart illustrates the international turnover of the top five telephone brands for 4 years.
Overall
, there are 5 companies such
as Samsung
, Apple, Nokia
, LG, and ZTE. Three periods are given(2009, 2011, 2013). The most traded mobile phone was Nokia
in 2009 and 2011. Samsung
was a bestseller in 2013.
Turning to the details, in 2009, Nokia
was the best with 450 points
. However
, it decreased year
after year
. In 2011, Nokia
sold for 400 scores with a difference of 50 points
. After that, Nokia
had a sharp drop in 2013 by 150 points
. The smallest company was ZTE with a gradual increase for 4 years.
As it is obvious, Samsung
was the second bestseller company in 2009. Then
, it started to increase. It rose by 100 points
in 2011, but it could not overtake Nokia
in that year
. Finally
, the Samsung
brand could ahead of Nokia
in 2013 by 200 points
. Apple and Samsung
were the only brands which increased year
after year
.Submitted by 29th of april on
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