The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.
The first bar graph indicates the number of hospital beds per thousand of
population
and the second table one gives information on the Correct article usage
the population
expetiture
of Governments and average Correct your spelling
expenditure
life
expectacy
in three Correct your spelling
expectancy
countires
.
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countries
counties
Overall
, Japan
allocates the largest amount of beds to patients followed by Germany. With regards to spending, the government of the United states
spends the biggest amount of budget on health care Correct your spelling
States
while
it has the shortest life
expectancy.
According to
the first graph, it is clear that
Japan
accounts for the largest population recording 14 thousand, which is nearly three times as large as other countries except
Germany at 8 Add the preposition
forexcept
thousands
. The third largest figure is Change to singular
thousand
Netherlands
marking around 4.2 thousand but the gap between it and that for Correct article usage
the Netherlands
spain
which is the smallest is quite narrow.
Looking at the second table, we can see that the spending of Change the capitalization
Spain
United
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the United
states
Correct your spelling
States
for
health Change preposition
on
comprise
the largest size at 6,719$ despite the shortest Correct subject-verb agreement
comprises
life
expectancy at 78. It is approximately twice larger than
Change preposition
as
that
Correct determiner usage
the
of
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apply
Netherlands
. When it comes to the figure for Correct article usage
the Netherlands
Japan
, it showed a reverse trend with United
Correct article usage
the United
states
. Correct your spelling
States
Japan
spend 2,581$ per person which is the smallest and the figure for Japan
's average life
expectancy is 83 which is the longest in this
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