Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of working from home.

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have a benefit and negative
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working from
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can produce a number of merits,
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personally disagree with
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for several reasons. Let’s
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by looking at the advantages of working from
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not only it helps them have a comfortable mood environment, but
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it may
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health
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their health
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or
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placed and more willing to
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flexible hours
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as earlier or later in the day or even at weekends.
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can help people meet certain needs.
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, the outbreak of the coronavirus (COVID-19) pandemic in March 2020 made
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commercial premises have to shut down in response to the government's requirements to protect public health so individuals can
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from
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way not be
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by others or focus
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more,
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increase income.
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, everyone doesn't have to waste time
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as
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the risk of accidents on the road,
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and save
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on commuting costs.
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,
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the difficult economic covid pandemic will
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fuel and vehicle costs. Another drawback is that low promotion chances because there are few opportunities to approach and interact with colleagues,
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working style becomes unprofessional.
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, it affects
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discipline, so the opportunity for advancement is slower. Especially, they can't find business and
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together more difficult.
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, they don't get to see their colleagues often,
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exchanges to solve problems should minimize industry results. In conclusion, despite the advantages of the main goal of working from
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,
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contend
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it
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has
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significantly
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effect on
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demand.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Remote work
  • Telecommuting
  • Home office
  • Flexible schedule
  • Productivity
  • Cost-effective
  • Isolation
  • Burnout
  • Work-life balance
  • Technical disruptions
  • Commuting
  • Distractions
  • Connectivity
  • Collaboration
  • Autonomy
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