Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

cyber era, the Internet is now becoming the most useful tool to search

information

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and acquire

knowledge

, some people suppose that

schools

will no longer

essential

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be essential

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and

children

can just stay at home to

study

.I

strongly

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against

this

statement, and I will explain why in

this

essay.

Firstly

,

schools

are the best place to gain

knowledge

since teachers not only answer

children

’s questions but

also

explain

it

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thoroughly

for

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them.

Moreover

, the

knowledge

comes from

schools

in many sources

such

as in

extra-curriculars

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extra-curricular

or experiments.

For instance

, many

children

in America have to dissect a frog to learn about their infants, and

this

will help the students have more experiences and easily remember the lesson.

Besides

, being monitored in educational progress may does wonder for

children

’s discipline and give them more motivation to

study

.

Furthermore

, students can

also

find out their advantages and disadvantages during they

study

at

schools

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because they must learn a lot of subjects and

may be

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maybe

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they will discover which they love and hate.

In addition

,

this

can help

children

orientate their future

occupation

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occupations

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and career.

For example

, many

children

who love chemistry are having

tendency

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to become a scientist or a professor in

this

field.

Finally

, the time when

children

still learning at

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school is great for sharpening their personal qualities .As students may not only

study

academic

knowledge

but

also

learn something about life from their teachers or even friends. In conclusion,

schools

still play a crucial role in our society and especially for

children

, so

that is

why I completely disagree that

children

can just stay at home to

study

.