Thanks to the development of technology, many employers are now offering their employees the option to work from home. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and give relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

It is true that the advanced

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technology have brought impact

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our societies like giving opportunities to

work

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from

home

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.

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as reducing

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time consuming

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and strengthening

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. Both of them will

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elaborate more

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in the following paragraphs.

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with,

members

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of the public could remove

time

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to commute to the workplace. When workers have to go to

office

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they need more

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for preparation and driving. After that,

Employee

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feel exhausted and sometimes cannot focus to fix their jobs.

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, the worker could not

fulfill

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targets from companies and

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to be jobless.

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, they could avoid it when they

work

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from

home

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and it

also

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could make the worker

have

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more

time

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to deal with their job.

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, Tika who is an

employees

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in

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her workstations

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workstations

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. When she could

work

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at

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it reduce

times

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of

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apply

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mobility and it makes her

having

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plenty of

time

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to cope with her tasks.

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, Working from

home

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makes people closer

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to

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their

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members

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of the family. When

members

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of societies stay at

home

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they know the circumstance deeply.

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,

Time

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which

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they do for go and back could allocate for doing something associated with enhancing the bonding among

members

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of the family.

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, the worker and family could dedicate

time

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to cook together

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that

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those activity

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could make them know deeply. In conclusion,

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someone could push themselves to use

the

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cutting-edge technology it will offer positive effects like improving quality

time

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with families and efficiency

time

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. I am concerned that all companies decide to do that. They will generate more money owing to their dedication to

work

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.