Thanks to the development of technology, many employers are now offering their employees the option to work from home. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and give relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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It is true that the advanced
of
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technology have brought impact
for
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our societies like giving opportunities to
work
from
home
.
This
phenomenon would have positive development
such
as reducing
time consuming
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and strengthening
relationship
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relationships
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. Both of them will
be
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elaborate more
details
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in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with,
members
of the public could remove
time
to commute to the workplace. When workers have to go to
office
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they need more
time
for preparation and driving. After that,
Employee
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Employees
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feel exhausted and sometimes cannot focus to fix their jobs.
As a result
, the worker could not
fulfill
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targets from companies and
threaten
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to be jobless.
However
, they could avoid it when they
work
from
home
and it
also
could make the worker
have
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more
time
to deal with their job.
For instance
, Tika who is an
employees
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in
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Shoppe company ought to spend 3 hours from her house to
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her workstations
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workstations
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. When she could
work
at
home
it reduce
times
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time
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of
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mobility and it makes her
having
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plenty of
time
to cope with her tasks.
Furthermore
, Working from
home
makes people closer
with
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their
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members
of the family. When
members
of societies stay at
home
they know the circumstance deeply.
Besides
,
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which
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they do for go and back could allocate for doing something associated with enhancing the bonding among
members
of the family.
For example
, the worker and family could dedicate
time
to cook together
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that
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those activity
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could make them know deeply. In conclusion,
while
someone could push themselves to use
the
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cutting-edge technology it will offer positive effects like improving quality
time
with families and efficiency
time
. I am concerned that all companies decide to do that. They will generate more money owing to their dedication to
work
.
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