The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates how much
people
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consumed
fuel
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in the United States and the United Kingdom. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the poorest and middle-income rage American spend more on energy purchases
whereas
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British
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rich
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people
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willing to pay more for car
fuel
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. In terms of the poorest range of
people
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, American spend more than the
British
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. it begins at almost 4% and
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peaks at 5.2%,
at the end
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of the period, it slightly falls to 5%
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Britain's
fuel
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expenditure
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comes to a dramatical growth and finishes at 2.8%. When it comes to middle income, the
fuel
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expenditure
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of American decrease steadily until
British
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fuel
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expenditure
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increased sharply and
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finally
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surpass the rage of rich
people
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in the UK.
This
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statistic conducted by Cermik and Reschovsky in 1997, shows the end of the survey is America has plumped into a nadir with 2.3% of
fuel
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expenditure
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and
British
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comes to 3.1% after a little bit of a fall.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, fuel, british, expenditure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "falls" was used 2 times.
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