The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how much
people
consumed
fuel
in the United States and the United Kingdom. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the poorest and middle-income rage American spend more on energy purchases
whereas
British
rich
people
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willing to pay more for car
fuel
. In terms of the poorest range of
people
, American spend more than the
British
. it begins at almost 4% and
then
peaks at 5.2%,
at the end
of the period, it slightly falls to 5%
while
Britain's
fuel
expenditure
comes to a dramatical growth and finishes at 2.8%. When it comes to middle income, the
fuel
expenditure
of American decrease steadily until
British
fuel
expenditure
increased sharply and
then
finally
surpass the rage of rich
people
in the UK.
This
statistic conducted by Cermik and Reschovsky in 1997, shows the end of the survey is America has plumped into a nadir with 2.3% of
fuel
expenditure
and
British
comes to 3.1% after a little bit of a fall.
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