The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how much
people
consumed fuel
in the United States and the United Kingdom. Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the poorest and middle-income rage American spend more on energy purchases whereas
British
rich people
willing to pay more for car Add a verb
arepeople
werepeople
fuel
.
In terms of the poorest range of people
, American spend more than the British
. it begins at almost 4% and then
peaks at 5.2%, at the end
of the period, it slightly falls to 5% while
Britain's fuel
expenditure
comes to a dramatical growth and finishes at 2.8%.
When it comes to middle income, the fuel
expenditure
of American decrease steadily until British
fuel
expenditure
increased sharply and then
finally
surpass the rage of rich people
in the UK. This
statistic conducted by Cermik and Reschovsky in 1997, shows the end of the survey is America has plumped into a nadir with 2.3% of fuel
expenditure
and British
comes to 3.1% after a little bit of a fall.Submitted by miriam3388 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, fuel, british, expenditure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "falls" was used 2 times.
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