The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how much
people
consumed Use synonyms
fuel
in the United States and the United Kingdom. Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the poorest and middle-income rage American spend more on energy purchases Linking Words
whereas
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British
rich Use synonyms
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people
willing to pay more for car Add a verb
arepeople
werepeople
fuel
.
In terms of the poorest range of Use synonyms
people
, American spend more than the Use synonyms
British
. it begins at almost 4% and Use synonyms
then
peaks at 5.2%, Linking Words
at the end
of the period, it slightly falls to 5% Linking Words
while
Britain's Linking Words
fuel
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expenditure
comes to a dramatical growth and finishes at 2.8%.
When it comes to middle income, the Use synonyms
fuel
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expenditure
of American decrease steadily until Use synonyms
British
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fuel
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expenditure
increased sharply and Use synonyms
then
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finally
surpass the rage of rich Linking Words
people
in the UK. Use synonyms
This
statistic conducted by Cermik and Reschovsky in 1997, shows the end of the survey is America has plumped into a nadir with 2.3% of Linking Words
fuel
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expenditure
and Use synonyms
British
comes to 3.1% after a little bit of a fall.Use synonyms
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