You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line chart depicts the figure of board visitors to different European sites: the
coast
, mountains and lakes from 1987 to 2007. It is clear from the graph that the
last
two years had the most significant
rates
of visiting the
coast
and lakes.
According to
what is shown, the mountains represented the various numbers during
this
period. In 1987 the figures start with 20
thousand
also
in the next year shows a slightly grew with around 25,000
while
, two years after the
rates
approximately being equivalent
whereas
in 2007 have jumped slowly and reached 35,000.
Moreover
, the
coast
and lake areas take around the same pattern.
Coast
rates
during 1987 started at 40
thousand
and in 1992 have a minor drop
then
in the next three years have a soared increase and reached about 75 in 2007.
Also
, the areas of the lake have the highest numbers in 1987 which represented 10
thousand
then
we can see a rapid increase in 1992 until
the
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1997 year the
rates
remained stable at 40,000, in 2002 we had a soared
incresed
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increased
and reached 75
thousand
while
the
rates
have dripped and stopped at 50,000 in 2007.
To sum up
, we could say that the
coast
and lakes sites seem more active places in comparison with the mountains places.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coast, rates, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "soared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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