You recently booked a part time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Say which part time course you booked Explain why you need to cancel your booking Ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir, Hi, I am Reza Frowtan, I have recently enrolled on a part-time development.

However

, I wanted to inform you I can not attend

this

program for some reasons that I will explain. Actually, I booked

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the 'Marketing Advance' plan. I know

this

period is so worthwhile for me

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and definitely

caused me to advance to my current job,but, unfortunately taking part in

this

development is impossible. because, my mother has cached Covide virus two days ago, and for that reason, I have to stay at home and look after her.

Moreover

, my sister has got a trip to another city and

this

is my duty to take care of. I have a question for you about other courses.

Apart from

this

development, are there any other courses in future weeks? I will become so happy let me know about those.

Therefore

, please send me their schedule,

in addition

, say which one of them is appropriate and practical for me. , please reply to my letter as soon as possible. yours faithfully,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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