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You recently booked a part time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Say which part time course you booked Explain why you need to cancel your booking Ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir, Hi, I am Reza Frowtan, I have recently enrolled on a part-time development.
However
, I wanted to inform you I can not attend
this
 program for some reasons that I will explain. Actually, I booked
in
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the 'Marketing Advance' plan. I know
this
 period is so worthwhile for me
anddefinitely
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and definitely
caused me to advance to my current job,but, unfortunately taking part in
this
 development is impossible. because, my mother has cached Covide virus two days ago, and for that reason, I have to stay at home and look after her.
Moreover
, my sister has got a trip to another city and
this
 is my duty to take care of. I have a question for you about other courses.
Apart from
this
 development, are there any other courses in future weeks? I will become so happy let me know about those.
Therefore
, please send me their schedule,
in addition
, say which one of them is appropriate and practical for me. , please reply to my letter as soon as possible. yours faithfully,
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