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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

#people #clothes #case
A bunch of
people
 have a preference to carry
clothes
 that are in trend and there
are
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 a myriad of reasons behind
this
. From my perspective,
this
 trend has positive and negative sides but
negatives
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the negatives
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 outweigh the positives. In
contemporary
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the contemporary
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 world,
people
 tend to follow ongoing trends and they spend tons of money on expensive brands as it gives them
feeling
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a feeling
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 of social inclusion. As a corollary, they gain
self confidence
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self-confidence
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 and become
self contentment
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self-contentment
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.
Moreover
, individuals who are more into
changes
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 prefer fashionable
clothes
, as fashion is dynamic.
Also
, in schools, students are required to conform as they have to wear
uniform
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a uniform
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 for
whole
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a whole
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 week. After passing out, these students are more attracted towards modern
clothes
. On the positive side, clothing is of paramount importance in posing first impressions. Wearing fancy
clothes
make
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makes
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people
 confident about themselves.
On the other hand
, spending
capitals
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capital
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 on
clothes
 more often is not worthwhile. Some of the masses cannot
afford
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itafford
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, and they purchase
on
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it on
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 credit cards.
This
 might
leads
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lead
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 to unnecessary loans and uncontrolled shopping could end up in bankruptcy.
As a result
, stress and depression
has
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 become common among
such
people
.
To conclude
, there are several reasons behind
admiration
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the admiration
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 of fancy attires. I believe, dressing up
according to
latest
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the latest
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 trend is good until a person is comfortable but
it's
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its
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 bad sides are impacting
people
 badly.
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