It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

With the advent of enormous technological enhancements, most

people

are willing to take risks both professionally and personally.

This

will help them in many ways as it not just increases one's self-esteem but

also

establishes them in a better place in society. There are numerous advantages to

this

statement rather than drawbacks and I will specify them

accordingly

.

Firstly

on the positive side,

people

who often take risks with proper knowledge of the things they aim,

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to be more successful. With all the exact inputs and hard work one can easily meet their goals.

For example

, Facebook which became a multi-billion turnover and most profitable company over a few years had a rough patch in its initial stages. Even with the tidy start, the owner without losing his self-esteem worked very hard by adding many creative and influential features to the app which is now paying the rewards for him. Because of its tremendous profits, every person is now willing to take

this

kind of risk and Facebook became the pioneer in all

this

. As

people

's approach towards

life

has changed a lot in the past few years, they are trying to take many risks as possible even in their personal lives.

For instance

, back in those days owning a car is a pretty big deal so everyone was very calculative about that ,

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people

nowadays are wanting that urge for a comfortable

life

and are willing to own it at any cost irrespective of their situations which in turn can be very disastrous if anything didn't go as planned and

this

might even cause a huge dent to their

life

and can

also

halt the career growth.

To sum up

, as the public perspective on

life

has changed a lot and risk-taking became a regular task both professionally and

also

personally

this

will increase not just the standards of living but

also

the approach towards the destination, but in calculative and immature steps will lead to failure so thinking before doing is very essential.