It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?
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, Facebook which became a multi-billion turnover and most profitable company over a few years had a rough patch in its initial stages. Even with the tidy start, the owner without losing his self-esteem worked very hard by adding many creative and influential features to the app which is now paying the rewards for him. Because of its tremendous profits, every person is now willing to take Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...