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The plans below show the layout of Grand Park now in 1920, and how it look after redevelopment today.

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The plan gives information on the change of Grand Park now and after refurbishment.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 Grand Park will be changed with plenty of renovation. Looking at the west side
first,
there were seats in 1920, but it has been demolished.
Additionally
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one
 of the two rose gardens
have
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 been removed as well. There was a stage for musicians in 1920, and it is replaced by the Amphitheatre for concerts today. When it comes to the middle part, the two entrances on the
upperside
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 and downside remained the same,
while
 the fountain in the centre of the place was replaced by the big square-type rose garden and is surrounded by four seats. As for the east side, there were
one
 rose garden and
one
 pond for water plants, but those were changed to the cafe and the children's play area
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today.
Furthermore
, on the downside, there were seats and the glasshouse in 1920, but those were replaced by
one
 big water feature
instead
 today.
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