Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now “one big traffic jam”. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Nowadays,

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cars are no longer symbols of wealth or luxurious possessions. There is

steady

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flow of car owners and ,

apparently

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this

affects the cities and I completely agree with the statement that the roads are highly congested and in

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I intend to suppose some measures that could be tacked to prevent

traffic

jams. First of all, it is irrefutable that urban areas suffer from

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amount of

traffic

,

due to

plethora of cars on the road. In the

last

few

decades

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more and more people can afford to own a car but

this

tendency has adverse effects on the individual's daily life. Unfortunately, every day the focal points of the majority of cities are congested even for hours, especially during the

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. Despite some obvious reasons described above , there are several actions that governments could take to solve the problem.

Firstly

, a simple solution would be

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to build or just

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extend the motor roads.

Thus

, the divers will be enabled to accelerate their speed and the

traffic

will disappear rapidly .

Moreover

, some improvement in the city's infrastructure

also

will be required in order to tackle the

traffic

. The second measure would be for governments to enforce stricter rules for drivers or even to charge them during specific timetables of the day and

this

will ensure that the

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chapstick

will decrease significantly. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that with people's and

government's

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efforts

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this

problem can be solved in the long run.

Additionally

, individuals should be aware of the consequences of their excessive use of cars.