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Mobile phones and the internet could have many benefits for older people. However, this age group uses technology the least . What are the benefits for old people of using mobile phones and internet. How can we encourage them to use this new technology?

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In
this
 contemporary epoch, technology made life more convenient for everyone.
Whereas
, elder ones used less modern gadgets and
internet
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. In my opinion, there are many advantages for older people of using smartphones and
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the internet
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internet
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internets
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such
 as communication, exercise and
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 and many other
and
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some
another methods
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 to encourage them, which I shall discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, owning to several reasons that emphasise, the benefits of
mobile
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the mobile
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phone
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phones
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 towards elder people. Primarily, as many children
are went
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to
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 far from home for their career
goal
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.So, older
one's
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ones
one
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 want to talk
them
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to them
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 and they like to use
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a smartphone
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smartphone
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smartphones
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 for calling purposes.
Moreover
 , some individuals liked to go walking and
exercises
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 and they wanted to check the number of calories.
Thus
 , they can burn more to become
healthier
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a healthier
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person
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people
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.
Therefore
 , there are many positive effects and the best way to
usage
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the usage
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 of mobile
phone
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phones
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.
On the other hand
 , there are some aspects that determine, the methods to encourage all age
group
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groups
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 of individuals to use
this
 technology. To a greater extent reason is
that
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the
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advance
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function of the mobile phone.
For instance
, iPhone
provide
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 a function that measures
heart
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the heart
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 rate of the
person
, which
keep
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inform
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 that
person
 about their health and there is
emergency
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the emergency
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 calling of
IOS
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the IOS
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 .
This
 software helps in bad situations
such
 as if
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a preson
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preson
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person
prison
 had an accident at any place .Immediately, the software of iPhone calls
to
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the family of that
person
 .
As a result
,
this
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 things encourage the users to attach
with
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to
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 the technology.
To conclude
, it is clear from the above discussion that there are abundant merits of smartphone
qnd
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and
internet
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the internet
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 , which makes
people
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people's
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 lives more convenient and comfortable in every field.
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