Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Individuals think that gaining knowledge of another
language
,
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is very significant go to on vacation abroad or trying to set
a
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career in a foreign
country
.
Besides
, other
people
believe that there are
also
some
reasons
to learn a different
country
's
language
. I will discuss both scenarios and give my opinion.
People
tend to learn a foreign
language
to travel to various countries and get another region's job. When they choose a foreign
country
for
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spend their quality time, they have to communicate with
people
in
English
or their local
language
.
Otherwise
,we may face several issues interacting with them.
Such
as if
people
go abroad for enjoying holidays and suddenly they need any important things from their hotel authorities, they will not properly express their demanded products
in
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the receptionist.
AS well as
some
people
have a goal to work out of the
country
. For
them
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English
is a mandatory
language
to learn.
For example
, those who are willing to establish their work life in USA or UK
,
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must become fluent in
English
. Because employees will handle lots of foreign buyers or clients. If they are not able to communicate with them, the company will not think a second time to fire them. That's why
people
tell that these facts are more essential than any other
reasons
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to enhance our second
language
skills.
On the other hand
, without giving two
reasons
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are
also
some facts to learn a foreign
language
. In our
country
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every school have
English
as a compulsory subject. Because it helps to expand our human brain. When we give attention to grave any different
language
, it creates pressure on our brain and we can think
multipurposly
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multipurpose
which is too much effective for our brain activity.
For instance
, in my whole education life, I have had to read
English
. Without reading ,
English
we can not obtain our desired score. When
any
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students did not take it seriously, they could not pass the exam. So we can say that it is
also
another fact to learn a foreign
language
attentively. In conclusion,
although
both
reasons
are crucial for expanding our
language
skills. But in my view, going to travel a different
country
or work in outside of the
country
, are the main key points to learning a foreign
language
. Everyone should concern to practise
this
language
.
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