You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: • Where have you moved? • What problem are you facing regarding the bank's communication? • What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.
Dear Mr Smith,
I am Harvey currently, leaving at flat 1,536, Forest Road, Canterbury 2036. I am writing to you with regard to the updation of my new
address
in my bank account.
First of all, two years ago, I access the bank services by opening my new account at Scotia Bank. At that time I was living at 74 Denscot Road, Sydney. Now due to
my ,job
I shifted from Sydney to Canterberry Add a comma
,job
last
month.
Moving on, now I am facing a problem because all my mail is sent to my older address
due to
that I am unable to know the transactions as well as
sometimes forget to pay my dues on time and have to pay penalty
.
Correct article usage
a penalty
Finally
, my humble request to you firstly
update my current address
in my account so that I will never face this
problem again. Moreover
, if you can please send a softcopy of some important mails
to my email ID [email protected] because it is very difficult for me to collect Correct your spelling
emails
mails
from my older Fix the agreement mistake
mail
address
. I would really thankful to you if you favour me in this
matter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
HarveySubmitted by parvinderp93 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite