You drive to work, but have recently had a problem parking your car at the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the problem with the parking explain how this is affecting you suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Kelvin I am writing
this
letter to address some
issue
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that
i
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am facing
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the parking of my
car
. Recently
i
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am driving the
car
to the
office
for my work because
i
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had stayed too far from the
office
. During In the ,
morining
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morning
all the
car
park lots are full
i
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need to wait for too long to park my
car
in white line parking. I am totally
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about
these
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because it
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very day late for
office
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and
miss
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some important meetings with clients, internal staff coordination and
also
the seminar
om
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the current project that
i
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had working
.
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the other ,hand I get lost pay for my late entry into the
office
.
This
situation is really affecting my
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personally and gets a bad impact
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other
office
staff. I
am have
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only hope that you could solve these problems by booking
for
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the carpark lot in the
office
and
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my monthly salary as well. I waiting for your positive feedback from you thanks Yours Faithfully Sundar
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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