Your friend who lives in another city has opened a new gift shop. You were unable to attend the inauguration due to an important competition you are a part of. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you must Congratulate your friend Explain your inability to attend Mention that you will visit soon

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going on,
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feel very happy after listening
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your new gift shop.
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is the best way to start your new journey.
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very embracing for me to not attend your opening ceremony of
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some medical emergencies.
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when
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free
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from here surely
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will visit
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you
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soon. that's a proud moment for me that you step forward towards
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successful
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night
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had to go to
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the take care of him.
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situation
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really forgot about your ceremony
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shop. his condition had very critical but
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said he
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now. after one week doctor will discharge him from
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. in the next
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got 3
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holiday from my office at that time
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surely come
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Congratulations on the new shop
  • thrilled to hear
  • unfortunately
  • important competition
  • couldn't attend
  • rightly understand
  • looking forward to
  • visit soon
  • cannot wait to see
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