You experienced an incident on public transport that caused you distress. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter ▪ describe the incident ▪ explain how this incident affected you ▪ suggest what could be done about it

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my disappointment with the service. That you had provided by the public transport. I had recently travelled from Madurai to Chennai on 22/04/2023 at 6.00 am I departed from Madurai during my travel. I felt that the Air conditioner is not working properly we had 6 hours journey on the
bus
. All the passengers on the
bus
fell terribly hot and were not able to breathe
due to
the lack of ventilation in the
Bus
. Because of
this
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my blood pressure increased and suddenly I get fainted on the
bus
. suddenly the
bus
stopped at the other corner of the road. some fellow passengers call the ambulance. they had been admitted to the hospital.
This
is the worst situation I had ever faced it. I need to bring some suggestions to your attention for not happen in future. Can you ask your staff to check that all the functions are in condition and working before they start and
also
keep regularLy inspections on
this
I hope that you look into
this
issue and make some changes to the incident Thank you Yours Faithfully Ram
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