The maps below show the development of a city in HCM in 1995 and now.

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The maps illustrate the changes in the city of HCM between 1995 and the present time. It is clear from the graph that residential construction has increased with new households and buildings.

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, the main differences in city development throughout the given period are the farmland turned into a golf side, the loss of a forest park and the appearance of the tennis courts in its place.

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, in 1995, there was a line of shops and fishmarket nearby the seaside, now they had been replaced by restaurants and apartments respectively.

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, the fishing port operated in 1995 had been deconstructed and does not exist anymore.

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the data, hotels and cafes remain in their place nowadays, as it has been in 1995.

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, a car park had been built adjacent to the mentioned attractions.

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whereas

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the city went through serious changes in attractions, its scheme remains as it was considered in the year 1995.

kuralay.abylgazinaFri Apr 21 2023

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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5 paragraphs

159 words

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