You are going for a one week vacation and your friend agreed to stay at your place while you are away. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter you should: thank him/her and tell the dates of your holiday explain how he/she enters the house describe what you expect him/her to do

Dear Ram, I am writing
this
letter to thank you for accepting my request that you will stay in the
house
.
Last
six months I had planned for these vacations to go and explore the nature of Thailand. I booked the Air ticket for the 5th of May 2023 on Sunday and I will return on the 11 of the same month. I will leave my home
at
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in
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early
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the early
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morning
5.00
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at 5.00
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clock. I know that you had busy on Sunday. I pass my
house
key to my next-door neighbour. You should call him in advance about what time you are going to
coming
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come
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. Once you get the key you come to the
house
. And there you see my lovable dog
is
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waiting for you. so would you take care of my dog and
also
my gardens in the surrounding oh my
house
as I mentioned so many thefts
is
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are
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happening in
this
surrounding lock the doors and windows all the time
.
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I had really no words to say to thank you for accepting to stay in the
house
. Thanks Best Regards Kumar
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