Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recyclied. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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The graph illustrates how many
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the Environmental Health Authority of Newton received from 1980 to 1996.
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faced an upward trend, the ones related to road
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noises sharply decreased throughout the period.
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slightly increased and
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drastically rose during the analyzed period. In 1980, they showed 500 and 300
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slightly in 1986 before gradually rising from 1988 to 1996
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when both reached a peak of 600
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and 1200
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of domestic or household
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significantly decreased from 500 in 1980 to 100 in 1996 approximately.
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noisy factories were responsible for 400
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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