In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this opinion ?

Overconsumption of fast

foods

have been resulting in detrimental

health

problems,

for example

, diabetes, obesity and high blood pressure. There

are

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myriad

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reasons for

this

, which include excessive oils and sodium.

However

, many people still turn a blind eye to

this

concerning issue and I believe the government should take

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action by imposing higher

tax

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taxes

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on fast

foods

.

While

imposing

taxes

might sound harsh and unfair towards the citizens, as it would mean

higher

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cost of living, the

health

risks from fast

food

greatly outweigh the few extra dollars spent on

taxes

.

Moreover

,

implementation

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of

taxes

might encourage

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people to purchase alternative, healthier

food

products for financial reasons. Even though healthier

food

options are being stereotyped as unappetizing and boring, they in fact provide various nutrients and vitamins that are necessary for

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maintainence

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maintenance

and growth of our body. Tax on fast

foods

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, might affect the businesses of fast

food

chains in the country as

less

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customers would be attracted to purchase from them

due to

the price increase. In order to resolve

this

issue, the government needs to subsidy

the

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fast

food

restaurants so that the restaurants can afford to survive on possibly fewer customers and potentially lesser income. Even though giving

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requires a huge sum of money, I believe it is worth it solely for the lifestyle of citizens because

health

is wealth.

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of the people should always be a priority of the country and I strongly support the government to impose

taxes

on fast

foods

so that everyone can be discouraged from consuming

these kind

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of

foods

and remain healthy.