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Some people think government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but the argue that it should be decided by individual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #government #lifestyle #argue
Thankfully, as time went by, everything was coming back to normal. My English and
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 were getting better, I was making new friends, and I eventually found a job and was able to provide
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 financially. At the time I was working as a waiter in different hotels. So, the situation was my academic performance was good at the uni, I had sufficient money, I had close friends, and I knew English and Turkish language. As you may have noticed, my situation was much better than before. Life was going on, but one day I told myself "Khusan, you cannot work as a waiter until you graduate from university, so you'd better do something else".
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, I decided to take the IELTS test. It was a new challenge for me. Managing my university classes, getting by and preparing for the IELTS test
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 tough. I still remember that once I came home after work, I used to learn English and didn't waste any minutes. I used to tell myself "Khusan, bugun yostig'ingni
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pulvini
pulling
puling
 to'lamaguningcha uxlamesan,
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". I was so determined even though it was really difficult. After working 8 or 10 hours a day, I used to be physically exhausted, yet I sacrificed my nights and kept learning daily.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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