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Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little action can be done to stop crime. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays, some communities are no longer safe for
people
 to walk around since the crime rate is increasing which scares residents from going outside of their respective homes. Some
people
 think that various
actions
 should be done to deal with criminality.
While
 others argue that small
actions
 would be enough. I personally believe that small or big measures are all necessary as long as for crime prevention and
safety
. Some
people
 are into adhering to different preventive means just to stop crimes. It means that more
actions
 from the authority are needed.
This
 serves as a deterrent for criminal activities and would-be
criminals
 to do
such
 unlawful acts. By implementing strict monitoring,
such
 as setting up 24-hour police surveillance and cameras. If all these measures are implemented and initiated, no crimes will be committed.
Thus
, promoting a safe and peaceful community for all.
On the other hand
, other
people
 argue that small
actions
 will only be required from the government if
people
 are mindful of their
actions
 and are on guard for their own
safety
 in a high-crime area.
Criminals
 as we know them, do crimes when provoke. Robbers,
for instance
, based on the statistics victims who are robbed are those identified as obviously showing off their wealth in public.
However
, to deter
criminals
 from mugging a person, they must act
accordingly
 and dress up appropriately to avoid being targeted by lawbreakers. In conclusion, it is certain criminality will remain, but not to extent that
people
 will be threatened to leave their homes. Personally, I would argue that government initiatives to promote
safety
 whether it is a minute or enormous move, are imperative to
people
's
safety
 and prevention which discourages
criminals
 to do unlawful acts.
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