You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think the place is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague- - explain why you are shifting out. - Describe your accommodation - Why is it suitable for your friend?

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Hi Amara, I am writing

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letter to offer my place to you as I think

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place will be the best fit for you to live in. I want to bring to your attention that I am leaving my current apartment on 30th May 2023, just before you arrive in Canada. You know I was always passionate about archectiture and I have got a scholarship to Queen's University in Toronto, they are providing me with free shelter for the rest of my course.

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, the house, where I live, has three bedrooms with a huge lounge. It is newly painted, well-furnished and well-equipped with the latest contemporary designs and furniture.

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, there is an uninterrupted water supply of 24 hours and security is

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up to a mark. I know you have gotten a new job in Toronto and will be coming next month. I think

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residence will be the best fit for you as you can get it at a cheaper price as compared to the other residence around

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area.

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, the residence does have a large garage, so you do not have to worry about parking your car on the road. I look forward to your kind consideration Best Regards, Smara Singh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

207 words

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You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think the place is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague- - explain why you are shifting out. - Describe your accommodation - Why is it suitable for your friend?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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The best way to educate children is by using the Internet in every lesson. To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making it effective for children?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.