In today’s world of digital technology, many people are using eBooks rather than paper material and I think there are various benefits of using online material, but it causes some problems to the libraries.

It is true that most
people
like to use electronic
books
instead
of paper base
books
nowadays. It has some benefits in
people
's lives but my opinion is that it will harm
to
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libraries
as well as
individuals' lives too. There are a number of reasons
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we can be benefitted
by
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using modern
books
. First of all, it saves our environment because
papers
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are made from trees which is why we have to cut our trees. Nowadays we do not need to do it because of electronic
books
.
For example
, The Daily Star newspaper published that deforestation is decreasing day by day which is almost 70% because most individuals do not cut
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trees for making paper.
Secondly
,
people
can easily read
the
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books
anywhere by using online
books
.
As a result
, they do not carry
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of
books
in
the
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schools, colleges and universities.
Finally
, students can
watching
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HD videos which are related to their study
as well as
the
the
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videos help them to enhance
the
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interest
on
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study
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studies
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.
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, Ideal School uses technology devices for academic study and most students like to do their classes which is why 90% of students do good results in the Secondary School Examination. It is argued above, it has some problems
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the
libraries
as well as
individuals
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individual's
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lives too.
To begin
with,
libraries
have to lock their library
for
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forever because most
persons
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will read
books
on
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online at home rather than go to the library. What is more, if
people
read
books
on mobile or computer
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screens
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for
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, it will harm their health.
For instance
, pupils who use
e-book
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e-books
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they
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will have eyes
problem
, neck pain and
also
mental health
problem
.
On the other hand
, book
seller
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will face
at
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a great loss as
public
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will not buy
books
from them.
As a consequence
, they will face
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crisis and will have unemployment
problem
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too. In conclusion, the
uses
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of
ebook
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ebooks
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can save our environment, efficient to use
it
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and
also
increase
the
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good result
whereas
it will be hampered
libraries
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by libraries
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, physical health and unemployment
problem
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problems
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.
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