Your friend who lives in another city has opened a new gift shop. You were unable to attend the inauguration due to an important competition you are a part of. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you must Congratulate your friend Explain your inability to attend Mention that you will visit soon

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Hi Amara, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and high spirit. I am writing

this

letter to give my heartiest congratulation on opening your new store in Ottawa.

Also

, I want to apologise for not being there for you at your shop opening ceremony. I know you always wished to run your own business and I am so happy that you have

finally

fulfilled your dream.

However

, I was not able to come on your special day because of an inevitable reason, on the same day my company organized an inter-department competition which was mandatory for all employees to attend.

Moreover

, I have seen the pictures of your gift store that you posted on Facebook. Not only does it seem very attractive and well-organised but the interior design is

also

fabulous.

In addition

, my mom brought some gifts from your store and it has increased my excitement to visit your place even more.

Thus

, next week when my employer grants me leave, I will come to your shop, and buy some items for myself as you know I am a shopaholic person Looking forward to meeting you next week and wishing your business will flourish and that you have a long list of customers. Warm Wishes, Suman Singh

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

211 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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