The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza.

The diagram illustrates the
process
of pizza
dough
.
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, it can be clearly seen that the
process
of manufacturing the pizza
dough
. It is a multistage linear
process
. The
process
consists of seven steps. It begins with
gather
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all the ingredients
while
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ends with
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the doughs pieces. Terms of the first stage, all the ingredients are poured into the mixer and have to take 4 cups(500 grams) 00
flours
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flour
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, 1/2
cups
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cup
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(325 grams)
water
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, 2
tea spoons
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teaspoons
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salt
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and 4/2
tea spoons
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teaspoons
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dry active yeast. All the elements
are gathered
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the
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mixer and
then
are
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mixed
its
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for 2 minutes. If the ingredients are mixed properly,
those
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have to mix again for 5 minutes at medium
rang
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. In the second stage, the raw
dough
have
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to mix for 2 minutes slowly. After doing it, the
dough
have
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to rise
minimum
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of 2 hours until it doubles in size In the
last
and final stage, the
dough
is mashed by using
hand
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a hand
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to remove all air bubbles.
Moreover
, the
dough
is cut
in
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into
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3 equal pieces or 285 grams each.
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