The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian

household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which

result from this energy use.
The following charts illustrate how
energy
is used in an average Australian household and the greenhouse gas emissions which result from
this
energy
use.
Overall
, there are 6 different usages which included heating, cooling, lighting, water heating, refrigeration, and other appliances. In Australian household
energy
use, the maximum percentage of
energy
used is 42% by heating. The second place is water heating which is used 30%. The third place is 15% by other appliances. Refrigeration and lighting are in order 7% and 4%. The
last
one is 2% by cooling.
On the other hand
, in Australian
households
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household's
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greenhouse gas emissions, the maximum percentage of gas used is 32% by water heating and the second one is 28% by other appliances. Refrigeration and heating are in order 14% and 15%. The
last
one is 3% by cooling.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sustainable practices
  • Energy efficiency
  • Renewable energy
  • Fossil fuels
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly appliances
  • Insulation
  • Solar panels
  • Recycling
  • Climate change
  • Kilowatt-hour (kWh)
  • Emissions-intensive
  • Energy audit
  • Smart meters
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