The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia´s share of the Japanese tourist markey. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia´s share of the Japanese tourist markey. 

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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Both graphs provide us with the manyfold of
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citizens spending their holidays outside their country and the proportion of these tourists that visited Australia considering the period from 1985 to 1995. A closer look at the bar chart reveals that the tendency of the
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population to visit other countries for vacations incremented from nearly 6.000.000 people in 1985 to over 14.000.000 in 1995.
On the other hand
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, we may appreciate a rise in Australia´s
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tourist rate, obtaining 2% of japanize tourism in 1995 to almost 6% in 1995. Even though there is a significant drop in 1995, where the trend increased but slightly fall to 6%. Analyzing Australia´s flow tourism, we may infer that in 1990 and 1995,
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people did not choose Australia as a destination for their holidays overseas.
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the graphs indicate an increasing tendency, inferring that Australia became a popular vacation destination for japanize citizens from 1985 to 1995.
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