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Now a day the surveillance is happening at almost all public places. Is it good or perceived bad by people? What are advantages and disadvantages?

#surveillance #places #people
With technological advancement and artificial
intelligence
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 the system is becoming stronger and
secure
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. Whether
surveillance
 systems is constructive
and
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 destructive approach is
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 debated topic these days. There are several advantages and disadvantages
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this
 statement. One evident merit is having installed cameras
at
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 public places
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 secure environment.
This
 is because these cameras are helping
administration
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 to keep
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 record of unwanted thefts and crimes.
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,
American
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 police in 2010, was able to
found
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 a gang of 10 people who were involved in different crimes with the help of these cameras that were present in
garden
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gardens
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, malls and on the streets. Another auspicious side of having
surveillance
 on traffic lights is to track the people who
violates
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 the traffic rules.
This
 helps Government to promise
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safety by preventing
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road side accidents by strict watch by
these camera
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 all the time.
Apart from
this
, in India it is not common to express
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feeling in
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public,
hence
 these activities are restricted and
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 the obedient culture of
country
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.
However
, there are some obvious drawbacks as well that cannot be ignored.
Firstly
,
surveillance
camera
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cameras
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 are not accurate every time.
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due to
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technological breakdown or wrong interpretations may release a wrong message to the public.
Secondly
, there is
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 of data leaking which may hinder someone’s privacy and safety. In conclusion,
while
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 accept that there are
few
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 demerits of having
surveillance
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a surveillance
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system
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systems
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 and can
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be
 strength by improving
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the
 systems. I believe it
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constructive
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 approach
due to
 various benefits.
Submitted by Navneet Dhand on

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