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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#translation #software #language
Many people claim that using translation tools is better than constantly going to courses and mastering the
language
 at a high level.My impression is that I disagree with
this
 proposal.
This
 essay will demonstrate why its proponents are correct.
Firstly
, I will list the benefits of
language
 learning:improve lifestyle, study, work and communication with the collective and so on.
Moreover
,If someone who has learned English and he has taken
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 certificate
in my opinion
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 I believe that he will not any difficulties not only
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his
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 country
maybe
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United States of America,Canada,Korea,Italy and so on.
Secondly
, there are some people who argue that someone after downloading the dictionary,
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 can not fully master the
language
.
For example
, in our country the attention to
language
 is very high,
besides
,there are different
languages
 in the republic.
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 respected president Shavkat Mirziyoyev signed the
desicion
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decision
 in the new education law that every school student should learn at least two
languages
. You can speak foreign
languages
 independently without any problems. Translation
app
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 should
be use
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on the other hand
 you do not know the new words.
To conclude
 considering the aforementioned points when we  will be learning other
languages
, it is useful  to use dictionary apps.
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