Many people around the world are still relying on the private car as their major mean of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest some solutionsit

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of private

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known as

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is becoming the main source of transportation because of its comfort, affordability,

reliability

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is escalating

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at an

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alarming rate.

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the case that urban areas around the world

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are

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increasingly suffer from congestion. I examine the reason for

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trend and suggest some practical policies the government could implement to solve

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crusial

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crucial

issue. Broadly speaking, there

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three main

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why

car

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the car

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is

major

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source of transportation. One is that

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has

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become more affordable for the consumer,

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,

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is

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no longer

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a luxury

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item for individuals except

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on family situations.

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has become

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unreliable in recent years, not least because many of many bus and train services reduced day by day,

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because of the difficulty funding them.

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, There are two basic

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problem

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with

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issue. Pollution is one of

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common problems is seeing in cities because

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of the

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large

use

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of

cars

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.

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due

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to the emissions of

cars

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, pollution is increasing as

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.

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, congestion is

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main reason

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more

use

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of private

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.A successful example of

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is the congestion charge scheme in London,which has certainly

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the level of traffic and more

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of private

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. Imposing a higher amount of

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on car ownership is one of the best and

effective

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most effective

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solutions to reduce

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apply

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private

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number of private

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vehicle.

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, The

singapore

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government's decision to impose a 100

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per cent

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tax

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on

cars

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forced many car owners to give up their existing

cars

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because of their inability to afford the

tax

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.

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has reduced the increasing

use

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of personal

vehicles

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.

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, improving the reliability and quality of public transport and

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the fare to make them more affordable. In conclusion,having said that all, there is no doubt that private

vehicles

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has

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many advantages, but

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high level of emissions and traffic jam

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becoming

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crucial issue. I believe that government could impose

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higher amount of

tax

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and make

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improvements

in

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to

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private

vehicles

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.