In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

Ordinary, some senior citizens in Britain have to move
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care
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home
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where medical
stuff
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can
take
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and live with other old individuals.
Also
, the
cost
of staying in the facility is paid by the government sometimes. I believe that the family members of the senior individual basically have to take
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responsibility but
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on their situation, the country should support them.
To begin
with, Britain will require
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budgets in the future if the family members of old citizens do not take the
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for the
cost
of the
care
at all.
In addition
, senior
immigrants
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citizens might increase exponentially,
then
the
gorvenment
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government
has to prepare more budgets.
For example
, once old people know that
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payment for the
care
home is covered by the budget
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welfare, a lot of people want to live in the place because it does not need the
cost
.
Moreover
, even though senior citizen does not need to move
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the facility, they might choose to live there if the
care
facility's
cost
is completely covered by welfare. At least,
family
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member
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of senior individuals try to look after
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themselves,
then
if they have to have some support, they can
finally
ask for help.
For instance
, even though an old person is not sick and does not need any support, they might be able to live in
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care
home without any
cost
.
To conclude
, family members of seniors have to try to pay for the
cost
of
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care
basically because the budgets in Britain are limited and cannot cover
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senior population and some individuals move there even though they do not need the
care
and live there.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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