In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Ordinary, some senior citizens in Britain have to move
in
Change preposition
into
care
Add an article
a care
the care
home
where medical Fix the agreement mistake
homes
stuff
can Correct your spelling
staff
take
Add a missing verb
be take
of
and live with other old individuals. Replace the word
off
Also
, the cost
of staying in the facility is paid by the government sometimes. I believe that the family members of the senior individual basically have to take the
responsibility but Correct article usage
apply
depends
on their situation, the country should support them.
Wrong verb form
depending
To begin
with, Britain will require humongus
budgets in the future if the family members of old citizens do not take the Correct your spelling
humongous
burdens
for the Fix the agreement mistake
burden
cost
of the care
at all. In addition
, senior immigrants
citizens might increase exponentially, Change the noun form
immigrant
then
the gorvenment
has to prepare more budgets. Correct your spelling
government
For example
, once old people know that whole
payment for the Correct article usage
the whole
care
home is covered by the budget of
welfare, a lot of people want to live in the place because it does not need the Change preposition
apply
cost
.
Moreover
, even though senior citizen does not need to move in
the facility, they might choose to live there if the Change preposition
into
care
facility's cost
is completely covered by welfare. At least, family
Add an article
a family
member
of senior individuals try to look after Fix the agreement mistake
members
by
themselves, Change preposition
apply
then
if they have to have some support, they can finally
ask for help. For instance
, even though an old person is not sick and does not need any support, they might be able to live in the
Correct article usage
a
care
home without any cost
.
To conclude
, family members of seniors have to try to pay for the cost
of the
Correct article usage
apply
care
basically because the budgets in Britain are limited and cannot cover whole
senior population and some individuals move there even though they do not need the Correct article usage
the whole
care
and live there.Submitted by Sunbear on
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