You eat in your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college manager . In your letter, •explain what you like about the cafeteria •say what is wrong with it •suggest how it could be improved
Dear Mr Black,
I am writing to give suggestions for some improvements to our college cafeteria. My name is Milav Soni and I usually eat at it
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Firstly
, I like the quantity of food you served, and the taste of it is very delicious and unforgettable. Additionally
, I liked your canteen service at the time of serving. All waiters are very friendly behaviour and there are always smile on their face.
Secondly
, I would like to mention some problems which I found for last
couple of months. I find that the wall of the cafeteria is very old and it is really needed to refurbish the wall with new Change the article
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Furthermore
, the area of the canteen is too cramped, and all chairs are seated very close with
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the cafeteria should be space enough so that all are seated in Remove the comma
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relaxing
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Lastly
, I would like to suggest some solutions for above
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problem, you should contact interior designers and will take ideas from them. They might give suitable options as per your idea. Change noun form
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Moreover
, for second
problem, you should hire our closed old canteen and use it for more space.
I would appreciate your immediate attention regarding Change the article
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matter. I will be happy to supply any further
information you require.
Best regards,
Milav SoniSubmitted by writing7 on
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