The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts illustrate the number of full-time jobs for UK bachelor's and
master
's pupils after leaving university in 2008. There are four activities the pupils did after leaving college: Part-time work, Voluntary, further
study, and unemployment.
Overall
, the destinations of UK graduates
were higher than postgraduates
in all activities, for both students
prefer to continue their studies. Students
working as volunteers were the lowest than others.
In 2008, graduate students
working in part-time jobs was 17,735 higher than postgraduates
students
at 2,535. Voluntary work is not too famous for students
which were
the number lower than other jobs. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Graduates
students
work as volunteers was
3500, and for Change the verb form
were
postgraduates
was 345. In the same year, 2008, the students
(master
's and postgraduates
) prefer to go for higher education, and the graphs show it was a greater number. Further
study for graduates
was 29,669 higher than master
's students
at 2,725. Unemployment for graduates
was 16,235 higher than for master
's students
at 1,625.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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