The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given charts illustrate the number of full-time jobs for UK bachelor's and

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's pupils after leaving university in 2008. There are four activities the pupils did after leaving college: Part-time work, Voluntary,

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study, and unemployment.

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, the destinations of UK

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were higher than

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in all activities, for both

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prefer to continue their studies.

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working as volunteers were the lowest than others. In 2008, graduate

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working in part-time jobs was 17,735 higher than

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students

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at 2,535. Voluntary work is not too famous for

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which

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the number lower than other jobs.

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students

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work as volunteers

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3500, and for

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was 345. In the same year, 2008, the

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(

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's and

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) prefer to go for higher education, and the graphs show it was a greater number.

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study for

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was 29,669 higher than

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students

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at 2,725. Unemployment for

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was 16,235 higher than for

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students

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at 1,625.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words master, graduates, postgraduates, students with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

160 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

graduate/postgraduate students
full-time work
further study
part-time education
voluntary work
unemployment
travel/gap year
percentage/proportion
field of study
economic factors
trends
comparison
analysis
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