The Table Below Shows the Numbers of Visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Table Below Shows the Numbers of Visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table data provides information about the size of tourists who visit Ashdown Museum prior to its refurbishment,
moreover
, the pie charts display how visitors feel about their experience during the same two years
according to
the surveys.
Overall
, there is a significant decrease in the unsatisfied part after the renovation, meanwhile, people who are very satisfied and satisfied have a noticeable growth. An inspection of the data in the table reveals that the number of visitors who have a trip to Ashdown Museum has apparently risen
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after its reconstruction which is nearly 18,000 people. In terms of visitors' happiness, the proportion of the very satisfied group increased dramatically from 15 per
cent
to 35 per
cent
. Meanwhile, in the same period, the dissatisfied part sunk substantially from 40 per
cent
to 15 per
cent
, which has a quarter lower than before. The satisfied and very unsatisfied sections are relatively up and down, which has a one-in-ten growth and one-in-twenty decline, respectively.
Whereas
, no response group has unchanged, the remaining 5 per
cent
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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