You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The diagram given portrays the procedure of creating the garden fertilizer by recycling the organic waste.
In general, there are five steps in
this
process. Its
starts with preparation, mixing all the ingredients, to produce the compost.
Looking into the details, Correct pronoun usage
It
the first step is
ensuring the plastic container is clean. The size of it is 2 meters cubic in which there is air in there. Next,
put the trash into it. The waste consists of food, grass, and newspaper. In addition
, all of them are arranged in order and each of them has a width 15centimeter.
The process continues with pour
some hot water and nitrogen into the jar. Change the verb form
pouring
Moreover
, close tightly the container to ensure there is no air that can come into the bottle. Thus
, the temperature becomes heat and it shows the waste is changing into the compost. Finally
, after six months the fertilizer is ready to use. Hence
, people can plant some flowers in the bottle by using the compost.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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