English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

#friend #holiday #region #information #advice #offer #clothes

Dear Denis, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I'm feeling grateful that you still remembered me

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

and for your kind letter. I'm pleased that

finally

, you made time to visit my country. I would suggest

this

season is perfect to visit my place and there is a good homestay, which is very close to my apartment.

Consequently

, we can spend some time together. There are quite interesting places to explore in and around like beautiful waterfalls, Hill Peak trek, Beaches and one big regional

festivals

Fix the agreement mistake

festival

show examples

are

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

present during your stay.

Also

, there are

few

Correct article usage

a few

show examples

more countryside options available to hang out like Gokarna, Mangaluru etc. So that you can spend a few days in local tourism as well. Please bring some cotton and light clothes

due to

the fact that the weather is hot

comparated

Correct your spelling

compared

to your place.

Also

don't forget to bring a good sunscreen lotion. Hope to meet you soon. Best Wishes, Swetha

Submitted by swethareddy.cn on Sat Apr 22 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

162 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
2.It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In recent times, some argue that it is more popular among students to have a year off between school and university. The in-depth analysis in the following paragraphs intends to discuss why the positive points of this trend outweigh the negative points.
5
band
Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both view and give your opinion
Many people assert that health care and education of residents should be paid by the government while others believe it is not the government’ responsibility. To me, we can solve this issue by a balance way, I will discuss both views and give my opinion in this essay below.
5
band
Some people say that parents have more important roles to play in children development.However, others argue that friends and television have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the realm of children improvement,some people believe that guardians have the main effect on them,whereas the opponents have alleged that Tv and their friends are more powerful to influence them.However,in my point of view,they both are indispensable in forming the personality of the learners.mentioned sides are uttered here.
5.5
band
Children of ages 7-11 now spend more time watching television and/or playing video games than before. What are the effects of this on children, family and society? What are the possible solutions to this situation
Nowadays, pre-teens spend more hours searching for TV programs or playing online video games than before. The primary effects are that many children might become obese and this increases the lack of communication between family members. The most viable solutions are setting time limit to play video games and setting family physical activities during the weekdays.
<4
band
There are severe social consequences to housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Dear Mr.Martin,

English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

2.It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both view and give your opinion

Some people say that parents have more important roles to play in children development.However, others argue that friends and television have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Children of ages 7-11 now spend more time watching television and/or playing video games than before. What are the effects of this on children, family and society? What are the possible solutions to this situation

There are severe social consequences to housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?