English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Dear Denis, Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I'm feeling grateful that you still remembered me
,
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and for your kind letter. I'm pleased that
finally
, you made time to visit my country. I would suggest
this
season is perfect to visit my place and there is a good homestay, which is very close to my apartment.
Consequently
, we can spend some time together. There are quite interesting places to explore in and around like beautiful waterfalls, Hill Peak trek, Beaches and one big regional
festivals
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present during your stay.
Also
, there are
few
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more countryside options available to hang out like Gokarna, Mangaluru etc. So that you can spend a few days in local tourism as well. Please bring some cotton and light clothes
due to
the fact that the weather is hot
comparated
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compared
to your place.
Also
don't forget to bring a good sunscreen lotion. Hope to meet you soon. Best Wishes, Swetha
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