You recently stayed at a hotel conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaint.

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I want to write a complaint about the

room

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to the hotel manager. I came to England for a company conference and stayed in a hotel as I did not have my own home. I was staying in the most prestigious and luxurious hotel in England. I settled in a

room

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here. I was told that you have been placed in one of our best rooms. But I saw that the conditions here are not sufficient. Maybe I am the only one with a problem in my

room

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. But there are not as many amenities as I would like.

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, the maids can not provide good service and

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room

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has no TV and has an uncomfortable bed. Sorry, but I had to complain about

this

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. Please give me a

room

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with a good bed, TV and all

amenities

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the amenities

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, the servants should

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provide good customer service.

Your

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Yours

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faithfully Qobiljonova Kamola

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task achievement

Add specific details about the hotel and conference to provide a clearer context.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph has a single, focused idea to improve coherence.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear introduction, body, and closing.

task achievement

The writing tone is mostly appropriate for a formal complaint letter.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

6.5

Logical structure

6.5

Single idea per paragraph

7.5

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

conference: a formal meeting for discussion
amenities: useful features or facilities
maintenance: the process of preserving a condition or situation
gratitude: the quality of being thankful
viable: capable of working successfully
refund: pay back (money), typically to a customer who is not satisfied with goods or services bought
complementary: combining in such a way as to enhance or emphasize the qualities of each other or another
discomfort: a state of unease or hardship
impact: have a strong effect on someone or something
resolve: settle or find a solution to a problem

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You recently stayed at a hotel conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaint.

The Greeting

Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about news. However, others believe that they can learn news more effectively through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.