It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people argue that the best quality clothes with expensive

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are better than the cheapest ones with low-level quality. I completely agree with

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point of view, in forthcoming paragraphs I shall give some details. To being with, many believe that expensive dresses are affordable,because, when you buy a good quality dress it can work for long periods.

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, you do not have to go shopping to purchase a new one.

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, these types of clothes mostly have a good shape and attractive colour, for ,

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I have a black and costly jacket that every time I wear , I think is new and beautiful.

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buying costly costumes

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not to

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spend more time and waste your time shopping, regarding

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issue, there are some

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stores that always have a variety of clothes that are appropriate for everyone.

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, I know a shoppe that I always buy my dresses from there, in my opinion, it usually has everything I need and does not

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store.

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their goods are so expensive.

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, these truly costly dresses are hard to buy and many people could not spend their money in order to shop. But, as I mentioned

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approach is very affordable and

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, because for some reasons that are mentioned.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

224 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sustainability
long-lasting
cost-per-wear
economical
investing
ethical manufacturing
transparent
exclusivity
designs
mass-produced
accessibility
budget
fast fashion
trends
maintenance
dry cleaning
social status
psychological implications

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?