the diagram shows the structure of home smokery and how it works
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According to
the diagram, a home smokery starts with
opening its first lid to let the fresh Change preposition
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air
flow into the pit located underground. This
air
continues to flow and enters the next container with a tightly closed cover. In this
stage, the air
still sinks continuously which helps in the of
burning logs in the second area.
Burning, which is the core process of any home smokery, produces hot gas that immediately passes through a narrow pipe and goes into a box placed at the ground level, which encloses several hanged fish and other types of meat. Change preposition
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This
is the end stage of the process wherein the heat coming from the second pit cooks the food items through smoking.
Overall
, the structure of a home smokery is mainly found underground. Clearly, the fresh air
that is
absorbed under, once heated, can be utilized to cure meat or fish with smoke.Submitted by liuyuanssg on
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