"These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary school. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?"

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Throughout the world,
teachers
play a significant role in everyone's life because they provide knowledge
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they have.
However
, nowadays only fewer
people
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interest to become
teachers
, especially in secondary school. The causes of
this
problem
seems
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to be
lack
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a lack
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of
earnngs
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earnings
and more
work load
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workload
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to
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the
teachers
; each should be addressed separately.
Firstly
,
people
who
working
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work
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as an educator in secondary school may
received
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low pay than the other professions, because in many countries teaching is a
non-profitale
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non-profitable
business so
schools
not
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are not
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able to provide more payroll like other jobs. In
india
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India
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, software
engineer
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engineers
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getting
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four times more
salary
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salaries
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than
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teachers
.
Secondly
, there is a more workload in
this
profession,
leacturer
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lecturer
often have to attend classes without breaks and
also
they do not have enough time to correct the exam paper on weekdays so they spend weekends
to
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doing
this
work,
Therefore
it creates stress
as well as
they don't have enough time to spend with their family.
Overall
, because of
lack
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a lack
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of income and
lot
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a lot
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of workload
people
get scared to choose
these profession
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this profession
these professions
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.
Therefore
,
schools
provide
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providing
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more salaries to the
teachers
may attract more
people
in
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to
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these teaching profession
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this teaching profession
these teaching professions
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. If
schools
provide valuable
salary
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salaries
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to
the
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educators,
people
may choose their carrier as a teacher.
For example
, Canadian
schools
offers
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offer
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more salaries to the
teachers
which encourage communities to become a teacher.
schools
should provide intervals between
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classes to reduce the workload,
therefore
,they do their extra work during the free periods which saves their weekends. In conclusion,
Teachers
ara
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are
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facing many challenges like low payroll and stress
due to
working hours, Which should be
encountred
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encountered
by
increase
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their payroll
as well as
provide
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providing
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free
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a free
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period
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periods
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between
the
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classes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational system
  • motivation
  • teacher shortage
  • work-life balance
  • job security
  • incentives
  • remuneration
  • public appreciation
  • career prospects
  • professional growth
  • retention rates
  • policy reforms
  • recruitment strategies
  • teaching methods
  • educational resources
  • government funding
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