"These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary school. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?"
Throughout the world,
teachers
play a significant role in everyone's life because they provide knowledge that they have. However
, nowadays only fewer people
show interest to become teachers
, especially in secondary school. The causes of this
problem seem to be a lack of earnings and more workload
for the teachers
; each should be addressed separately.
Firstly
, people
who work as an educator in secondary school may receive low pay than the other professions, because in many countries teaching is a non-profitable business so schools are not able to provide more payroll like other jobs. In India, software engineers get four times more salaries
than teachers
. Secondly
, there is a more workload
in this
profession, lecturer
often have to attend classes without breaks and Fix the agreement mistake
lecturers
also
they do not have enough time to correct the exam paper on weekdays so they spend weekends doing this
work, Therefore
it creates stress as well as
they don't have enough time to spend with their family. Overall
, because of a lack of income and a lot of Change to a plural noun
workloads
workload
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,workload
people
get scared to choose this
profession.
Therefore
, department
providing more Correct article usage
the department
salaries
to the faculty may attract more community to this
teaching profession. If Correct article usage
the academy
academy
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academies
provide
valuable Change the verb form
provides
salaries
to educators, people
may choose their carrier as a teacher. For example
, Canadian schools offer more salaries
to the
organization which encourage communities to become a teacher. schools should provide intervals between classes to reduce the Correct article usage
apply
workload
, therefore
,they do their extra work during the free periods which saves their weekends.
In conclusion, Teachers
are facing many challenges like low payroll and stress due to
working hours, Which should be encountered by increasing their payroll as well as
providing a
free Correct article usage
apply
periods
between classes.Correct the article-noun agreement
period
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