"These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary school. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?"

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Throughout the world,
teachers
play a significant role in everyone's life because they provide knowledge that they have.
However
, nowadays only fewer
people
show interest to become
teachers
, especially in secondary school. The causes of
this
problem seem to be a lack of earnings and more
workload
for the
teachers
; each should be addressed separately.
Firstly
,
people
who work as an educator in secondary school may receive low pay than the other professions, because in many countries teaching is a non-profitable business so schools are not able to provide more payroll like other jobs. In India, software engineers get four times more
salaries
than
teachers
.
Secondly
, there is a more
workload
in
this
profession,
lecturer
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lecturers
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often have to attend classes without breaks and
also
they do not have enough time to correct the exam paper on weekdays so they spend weekends doing
this
work,
Therefore
it creates stress
as well as
they don't have enough time to spend with their family.
Overall
, because of a lack of income and a lot of
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workload
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people
get scared to choose
this
profession.
Therefore
,
department
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providing more
salaries
to the faculty may attract more community to
this
teaching profession. If
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the academy
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academy
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provide
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valuable
salaries
to educators,
people
may choose their carrier as a teacher.
For example
, Canadian schools offer more
salaries
to
the
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organization which encourage communities to become a teacher. schools should provide intervals between classes to reduce the
workload
,
therefore
,they do their extra work during the free periods which saves their weekends. In conclusion,
Teachers
are facing many challenges like low payroll and stress
due to
working hours, Which should be encountered by increasing their payroll
as well as
providing
a
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free
periods
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period
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between classes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational system
  • motivation
  • teacher shortage
  • work-life balance
  • job security
  • incentives
  • remuneration
  • public appreciation
  • career prospects
  • professional growth
  • retention rates
  • policy reforms
  • recruitment strategies
  • teaching methods
  • educational resources
  • government funding
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