where i want to live it is perfect to live do you agree or disagree

Every person has a dream
place
to live, the same as I do.My target country is
USA
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. Since childhood, I want to travel the world with a caravan.
However
, when I watch movies shot in American towns, I wish to stay in
America
. It is one of my biggest goals, perhaps.When people think of staying in
America
, they think of staying in the
center
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of the city (Los Angels, New York). Now let me tell you what kind of life I wish for in
America
. I have a small but spacious
house
in a quiet
town
in
America
. On the 1st floor of the
house
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there is a coffee corner, a small kitchen to prepare my
favorite
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meals, a separate room for me to study and a living room. There is a staircase from
the
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inside
of
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my
house
. There is a small
place
for me to read books under the stairs. And the 2nd floor is an attic bedroom. In front of the
house
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there are green trees, a mailbox and my dog's kennel. On the right side of the
house
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there is a garage to store the car that I rarely use and my bicycle
that
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I ride every day. There is a
place
where I can relax in the back of the
house
, which has a swing. Every day I go to work, walk my dog
,
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and ride a bicycle. I’m talking about
this
town
,
this
house
is similar to the
town
of Hawkins in the movie Stranger Things. The
town
of Hawkins is exactly the
place
I dreamed of. Its quiet streets, attractive mansard houses, and high schools attract my attention. A person should turn his dreams into goals and goals into reality. He should work hard for
this
. Most of all, he should not give up.
America
was my dream. Now it is my goal. And I believe that one day I will make them come true. Because I believe in it.
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